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Old 01-20-2010, 02:14 PM
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Hi there,

i'm a newbie and at present having no slr, or digital camera as my brother took the camera with him for tour.. i'm now using my HTC Prophet that i love as its the first camera equipment i had .... till now. these portraits is just a try... however i need honest critiques from all of you so that i can improve a lot...."

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HTC PROPHET 2MP CAMERA WITH MACRO LENS... no other exif data available..:

My Sis's girl thumb Chewing and I over exposed the pic on the left but my sis got into pic on right so had to remove her in ps ...


if you fell i'm lacking something as a photographer please help me out... friends..!!
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Old 01-20-2010, 02:21 PM
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You can't post 3 pics in one post. Read the rules.

You can work for jails to take mug shots) Sorry, I had to laugh at that one.
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Old 01-20-2010, 02:28 PM
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sorry i'm new to the forum...and starting as a beginner... and may i know which pic made to laugh... say the no: (i hope its possible be third)

anyhow thank you for your comments and warnings... thanks...
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Old 01-20-2010, 03:10 PM
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Very cute girl but the overexposure is defintely distracting and removing the sister in ps left a dark line along the right hand side of the girl's face...that was the first thing that jumped out at me even before I read your comments about ps work.
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