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Hi All
I would love some critique on this shot, Mainly on the composition and lighting. The Details are as follows Make: Olympus Model: E520 Shutter Speed: 1/80th F Stop: F5.6 ISO: 400 Focal Length: 42mm Flash: Fired I have added some sharpening to the eyes and softening to the face in post processing. All Advice and Critique is more than welcome thankyou |
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Btafly,
What a beautiful girl. I really like the expression on her face. Composition looks great to me, if I was really picky I would say it might be nicer if the shot was taken after a little more above her. (make sense) Other then that the lighting looks good to me but then again I'm new so I will let the experts answer that .. .. CW |
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Excellent use of window light. In the lighting, the only recommendations that I would make is to use a piece of white poster board or something slightly reflective on camera right to help even out the lighting on the face. The dress appears slightly overexposed (possibly due to the flash). Close the flash and allow the window light. This will also warm the image slightly as flash tends to cool off an image.
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Steve, Online Photography Lessons My Flickr Photostream Gear: Nikon D200, Nikon 55-200 VR f/4, Tamron 90mm f/2.8, Nikon 50mm f/1.8, Nikon SB-800, assortment of lighting gear. |
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