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Old 12-27-2009, 03:59 AM
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So i decided i actually wanted someone to model for me so i could just experiment with "that type of picture".

Head in the Clouds by ~Bsackler on deviantART

Can be seen there, i know the right hand side has some sliver of the background which i guess i just missed before uploading it. Exif data can be found at the link.

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Old 12-27-2009, 04:03 AM
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I like the pose, the colours, and the photo in general.

However, the edges where you cut out the background are kinda rough... it's really obvious that you cut the background out, which is not something that you want catching the viewer's attention.
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Old 12-27-2009, 05:17 PM
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First thing I noticed was the cut off feet. Second was, it seems she's not level, her head is lower.

Since you cut out the background, I'd have added a cloudy sky....you did title the picture "head in the clouds."
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Old 12-27-2009, 06:34 PM
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yea, deviant art requires a title lol, i didn't want to just leave it untitled. Im almost positive its level though, might be a result of the perspective but ill go check just to be sure.
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