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Old 12-23-2009, 06:23 AM
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New at photography and I'm trying to put what I'm learning into practice. Well here is a pic of my 1 yr old daughter Janai. I think I over did it with the levels (also trying to wrap my brain around the post processing side of it as well).

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camera: canon rebel xs
exposure: 1/125
aperture: f/5.0
focal length: 150 mm
iso speed: 800

post processing wise, I've done some sharping and adjusted the levels in GIMP.

First picture here for your praise/slaughter.

Any tips/comments on what to improve on in greatly appreciated.

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Old 12-23-2009, 06:49 AM
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I like the glow in the eye.
Outstanding picture captured by you.
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Great photo, indeed, love the difused light. Really, the only change I'd make is to twist around the subject a bit to remove that wall (?) on the right hand side, maybe through in a reflector on the left to highlight a bit more of the eyes.

Best of luck.
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Yeah, the picture looks great, she's got a very intense look in her eyes. Kinda cute to see on a little lady thins young.

But that grey block of whatever on the right of the frame has to go.
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Did you say you're new at this?! Beautiful photo.
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Very beautiful capture and child...She is thinking. Hey!!! take out the sucky... I wanna Big Mac
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Old 12-23-2009, 03:43 PM
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Very nice photo! I would like to see the wall gone and would like to see more of her head. This is a great start! Keep up the good work!
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Thanks all for the words. That grey thing is actually a door she was playing with. I was trying to be careful as far as adjusting the levels and I didn't want to skin to have a red tint to them. The eyes were hard as well. Maybe I should just make another adjustment layer to treat the eyes? In the untreted shot, they are lighter.
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I think it's a remarkable capture - so very razor sharp! I'm not a huge fan of the composition with the door, but with kids it's so much important to capture their expression. Really great start!
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