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Old 12-18-2009, 11:57 PM
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hey everyone, these are my very first shots & attempt to be creative in the bathroom with my new 50mm 1.8. Please,let me know what you think- comment & critique ?



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Old 12-19-2009, 12:52 AM
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Hi Bahamaboy.

When you use the image link you need to paste over the "http://" which is in the box by default not paste after it.
Also you need to look at the Critique Forum Rules specifically only one image in critique and post the EXIF to go with it.
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Old 12-22-2009, 05:52 AM
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I like the second one, but maybe a bit too far to the left and I feel like your pose and expression needs more contrast, not less. Excellent start though
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Old 12-23-2009, 07:06 PM
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50mm are lens! the one thing I think I would is have him change his shirt wite on white is very hard to shoot.
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