Black and White Portrait, composition help?

[BigScott]

Hi, I am new to the website and just getting started in digital photography. I am not looking to become a "pro" but want to take good pictures instead of just snapshots. This was an attempt at a black and white of my daughter sleeping. The light is from the window in the room. The only pp is fill lighting, the picture was originally in color and I created the glow. I am looking for help with composition mostly and lighting. Anything else that you have to contribute would be greatly appreciated as well. Thanks in advance for all of your help.

EXIF

Image Size: 3648 x 2736
File Info 2
Date Shot: 12/14/2009 13:56:19
Image Quality: Jpeg Normal (8-bit)
Camera Info
Device: Nikon COOLPIX L100
Focal Length: 10.1mm
Digital Zoom Ratio: 1.00
Converter: None
Focus Mode: AF-C
VR: ON
Exposure
Aperture: F/4.1
Shutter Speed: 1/60.7s
Exposure Mode: Programmed Auto
Exposure Comp.: 0EV
Metering: Matrix
ISO Sensitivity: Auto (ISO 271)
Flash
Flash Sync Mode:
Image Settings
White Balance: Auto, 0
Noise Reduction: OFF
Active D-Lighting:
Optimize Image
Optimize Image:
Color: Standard color
Image Adjustment: Auto
Saturation Comp.: 0
Sharpening: Auto

[windrider86]

I would have tried this at a different angle. The whole looking up the nose thing is never flattering.
Watch the sunlight and shadows as well. The harsh lines from the shadows can be a disaster.

[BigScott]

Next time I'll try an angle more toward the top of the head. I see what you mean about the shadows, would lightening this more in pp be enough or do I just need to make sure there are no big shadows at all like this next time? Thanks for the help. I appreciate the cc.

[windrider86]

You can fix the shadows in post but it isnt easy. I'd opt for a new shoot where the shadows arent so harsh

[daddyoproductions]

Another thing you might want to try is to put up a white sheet or white shower curtain or something else at the window to help diffuse the light. This would help with the blown out highlights and dark shadows.