Been gone awhile....did i make this okay?

[shane_and_holly]

This is just a snapshot that I took during a shoot, but I really like it. Did I make it good enough to put in their gallery?

Sorry if I broke any of the rules...i tried not to...

[fbroschart]

I like it alot, except for the pole coming out of her hip. Perhaps you could clone that out in photoshop?

[shane_and_holly]

ahhhh thank you..lol...i knew there was SOMETHING bugging me...and thats it! lol!

[willbrawn]

ya its a good image, I second the pole in the hip. Just make sure you check your background before shooting : )

[shane_and_holly]

Thanks! I will definatly take out the pesky pole.

Originally Posted by willbrawn

ya its a good image, I second the pole in the hip. Just make sure you check your background before shooting : )

[Nicole]

And to me the tilt is kind of annoying. It doesn't seem extreme enough to look on purpose, so it kind of just seems like a mistake. So, fix the angle, fix the pole coming out of her hip, and I do think you have a winner

[ttosifa]

The picture is leaning (the pole coming out of her hip is the evidence). The lean makes it "uncomfortable."

EDIT: Nicole beat me!

[shane_and_holly]

i didnt even notcie!! lol..ive been looking at the screen for a LONG time. Thanks!

[kgb224]

I agree The pole is a problem.As the others comment there is a lean effect as well.Fix it asnd you have a gemn of a capture.

[JohnnyA]

I''m a newby in here, but yes the pole is in a bad spot. Also, the horizon line looks a little crocked to me. I could be wrong. Nice shot though. I like the background.