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12-09-2009, 04:31 PM
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Tereza - Theresa Portrait
Well, my first post here... Please critique this one photo. Thank You and don`t hesitate to be honest.
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12-09-2009, 05:27 PM
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The dress strap on the right side of the frame makes it look like her shoulder has been cut off.
Other than that I like the way her hair frames her face, and her eyes are great.
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12-09-2009, 06:59 PM
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Yes, I was too focused on her eyes, that I have missed the right composition. I must think on that next time. Thanks for useful comments :-)
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12-10-2009, 04:06 AM
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I think it's gorgeous!
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12-10-2009, 04:43 AM
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Yes, the strap is distracting. But the way the photo is composed is very interesting. It's not normal but seems to work in an intriguing way. I can't really describe it, but I like it a lot!
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12-10-2009, 09:12 AM
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Quote:
But the strap is distracting though.
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Gear: Nikon D200, Nikkor AF 50mm f1,8 D, SB-600 flashlight and some other stuff including my brain :-) Dear DPS forum member: Here on DPS is everyone so kind... I am sorry, that I am not every time I write a comment. I try only to be honest. So if I will be ever hard on You, don`t take this as a attack. It`s only my way to say, that You have to improve Your skills. :-)
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12-10-2009, 09:47 AM
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Outstanding capture and post work.
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