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Old 12-04-2009, 12:08 AM
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Smile Girls Watch out - Self Portrait - Critique Please

Just kidding. I got you to look. First self portrait. Not sure about the lighting. Too much light? Any other advice?

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Old 12-04-2009, 02:01 AM
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I think the highlights on the cheeks are a bit bright, and I would have liked it better if you would not have cut off the forehead and the chin. But otherwise, good work.
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Old 12-04-2009, 03:21 AM
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I am no expert by any means, but I actually think the cropping is interesting. I don't have any advice. I'd probably agree that the cheeks look pretty washed out....but I still think it is a nice, shapre pic. Funny title. You did get me to look.
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Old 12-04-2009, 07:08 AM
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I like it, although I don't think you should have cut off your forehead and chin.... Otherwise, I like the composition and lighting.
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