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Hello, welcome to dPS. What specifically would you like critique on in the photograph?
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Old 12-03-2009, 07:48 PM
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It would seem the saturation has been pushed a tad too hard on this one.

Also, I would have cropped the face tight to remove the most of the surrounds
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Thanks so much for the feedback. Much appreciated. Have made some changes but think I got the sharpening a bit wrong. Am quite new to the image manipulation bit.
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Old 12-04-2009, 12:48 PM
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Hi

I hope you don't mind but I edited your image and am re-posting my quick edit for you. I used Adobe PS CS4. All I did was use the same crop you used in your pp attempt. Then, I used a cooling filter on the image and did a selective sharpen on the eyes. Let me know and I'll take it down if you want.
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