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Old 12-01-2009, 08:16 AM
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I would like to invite everybody to comment this picture, thanks in advance..

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Old 12-01-2009, 12:14 PM
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I like how well detached she is from the background.. but... he way her head is tilted gives me somehow the feeling that she is falling or is unbalanced. Also, your focus point seems to be the top part of her hijab rather then her eyes so i find myself paying more attention to her hijab then her face...

Not sure what exactly you wanted critique on. The rules of this section state to ask specific questions...

Thats my 2 cents anyway...

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Old 12-01-2009, 05:40 PM
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I like how well detached she is from the background.. but... he way her head is tilted gives me somehow the feeling that she is falling or is unbalanced. Also, your focus point seems to be the top part of her hijab rather then her eyes so i find myself paying more attention to her hijab then her face...

Not sure what exactly you wanted critique on. The rules of this section state to ask specific questions...

Thats my 2 cents anyway...

Alexandra
Hai Alexandra, thanks for your comment and point of view, and also thanks for pointed out that I should ask specific question in this section. Don't realize it before, do really appreciate your helps.
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