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Old 11-28-2009, 03:27 PM
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Default Portrait : My first with off cam flash
after PP


before PP


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[Image]
Make = NIKON CORPORATION
Model = NIKON D90
Software = Ver.1.00
Date Time = 2009-11-28 23:17:43

[Camera]
Exposure Time = 1/200"
F Number = F11
Exposure Program = Manual
ISO Speed Ratings = 100
Exif Version = Version 2.21
Date Time Original = 2009-11-28 18:45:32
Date Time Digitized = 2009-11-28 18:45:32
Shutter Speed Value = 7.64 TV
Aperture Value = 6.92 AV
Exposure Bias Value = ±0EV
Max Aperture Value = F5.28
Metering Mode = Pattern
Light Source = unknown
Flash = Flash fired, compulsory flash mode, return light not detected
Focal Length = 62mm
Scene Type = A directly photographed image
Custom Rendered = Normal process
Exposure Mode = Manual exposure
White Balance = Auto white balance
Digital Zoom Ratio = 1x
Focal Length In 35mm Film = 93mm


critique on the way i crop the image, critique on the positioning of my flash.

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Old 11-28-2009, 03:30 PM
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I think there is too much shirt in the cropped photo...go more for the head shot.
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Old 11-28-2009, 03:59 PM
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I agree with the above, also maybe a bit dark for my tastes
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