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Old 11-19-2009, 04:06 PM
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I took this picture of my daughter the other day planning to give it to her preschool teacher for Christmas. Does the selective colouring work, or should I stick with the colour version? Any other suggestions are welcome as well. Thanks!

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Old 11-19-2009, 04:12 PM
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I like the selective colour one, it looks really nice. The blur on your daughter face looks unnatural, did you PS it? If yes, I would have made it a little softer. Great shot though.
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Old 11-19-2009, 04:27 PM
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I like the selective color but the orton effect does not work on this image I think. I would also pay more attention to the backgrounds so you can try and position her or the camera to reduce distracting elements in the background (The window).
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Old 11-20-2009, 09:16 PM
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I like the selective color one.
I think if you blacken out the background a bit more, it'll help her stand out and make it a bit more dramatic.
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