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i like the colors and you have very nice depth of feild. just the perfect amount of focus. its very warm but i think thats what you were going for. the only thing i'd suggest its maybe having her facing a little more towards the camera. the angle makes her eyes look a little funny. and her eyes could also stand to be a bit lighter but overall i like. nice!
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I think the angle of her face works good, but I'd have had her looking at a different angle. Then the eyes would look nicer.
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Thanks for the input. We were just walking around and took a quick pic. She does like pictures of her self so I try to catch her off gaurd. I was wondering if the color was to bright thats why i threw it on here. That day was kind of gloomy too. Now I just need to take some more pictures
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I would definitely desaturate the entire image a little bit. The biggest issue for me is how blown out the right side of her face is, with no delineation between her nose and cheek. It is, however, a very nice candid. Keep up the good work.
Jim
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