self portrait / critique

[Rommy]

nikon d90
F. 7.1
exp. 1/125
iso. 250


please critique

[Stargazer1223]

I like the shot in theory... however I think the execution may be a little clumsy. You are out of focus, for starters. Also, I think the way you are posed is a bit awkward to look at, particularly around your knees and feet where you are so bunched up and bent around. Love the black and white choice for this, and I think you could redo this and make a very wonderful image.