Does this seem a bit blah and could it use some brightness?

[Benphall]

When i first looked at this i loved it but i just looked at it again and there seems to be something off. however i cant quite place my finger on it.... comments , theorys

[Bluenoser]

Could you post the EXIF please?

[wulf]

It might work better with sharper detail. A lot of the image seems to have quite a greenish cast, too - it might well be reflected light from the plants but it gives a sickish pallor.

Wulf

[irishmuth]

The bottom half of the photo looks very dark. There's a point around her cheek bones where everything below is very dark.

[zona5101]

probably want to pp the powerlines out...
and dittos to what irish & wulf said...

[M_M]

I like it, a very interesting shot! But I'd paint down the hotspot on her nose..maybe just a touch on the forehead.

[ocnsprt]

I think your work is the beginnings of osme serious modeling photogrpaher career!!!! Take a look at x CASEY CURRY x he does work like this shot! I looked at the set, their are gorgeous and very well composed, I jus thtink they need a little touch up in photoshop. this ones a tad dark and her skin look very uneven and the blowout spots are not flattering on her noes. the colors are a little bland as well. So its the making of a perfect shot just needs a little tlc. Here is a rough edit, i can do better with a full size image but the ones you uploaded are very low res. do you have a flickr???

[Benphall]

Thank you all for the comments i do agree that the sharper the better for this. will get on this and upload the improved version soon

[denja]

I agree with 'ocnsprt' about your image. It is a fine effort. I also applaud her edit. It is really nice. I hope both of you don't mind, but I took the edit a bit further, and cloned out the power line and did some 'pop' work on the eyes. Let me know what you think.

Jim

[ocnsprt]

[QUOTE=denja;696219]I agree with 'ocnsprt' about your image. It is a fine effort. I also applaud her edit. It is really nice. I hope both of you don't mind, but I took the edit a bit further, and cloned out the power line and did some 'pop' work on the eyes. Let me know what you think.

Jim

QUOTE]

This is a very well imroved edit! Great pop on the eyes (: