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There is no post-treatment , I wonder if it is too close ?? Your thought ??...

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Old 09-27-2009, 07:55 PM
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It seems a bit blown out for me as far as lighting goes...I really would like to see the crop be above the blonde's head so as to not cut it out...just my 2 cents!!
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A nice, expressive image. I took the liberty of adjusting the levels and "popping" the eyes. If you want me to take this down, let me know. Otherwise, let me know what you think. I don't think it is too close at all. but I would consider framing it a little higher so as to not cut off the blonde's had.

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A nice, expressive image. I took the liberty of adjusting the levels and "popping" the eyes. If you want me to take this down, let me know. Otherwise, let me know what you think. I don't think it is too close at all. but I would consider framing it a little higher so as to not cut off the blonde's had.

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Thanks, I was zooming during the exposure and I suppose that this explain the "off frame"
I don't use to do this and it was rather an experience for me, but your opinions tell me to try further this way. though I like the "mist" aspect that this technique give to the picture
Being french native, I apologize for my poor engish..
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