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Old 09-26-2009, 08:15 PM
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Hi,
I am practicing my indoor skills on my children and would like to know if you think composition and focus look right?

Used black backdrop against door, one light unit to the right of subjects, diffuser on flash and dropped aperture to 4.0 (can't get any lower)
Any comments are more than welcome since I am not really experienced in indoor photography...

Thanks to all of you who will comment...:-)

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Old 09-26-2009, 08:45 PM
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Well, I think you did a nice job. No harsh shadows, good focus on the eyes. I would crop a little off the right edge just to delete the negative space, it doesn't really contribute anything positive to the image. But otherwise the composition is good.
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Thank you...:-) Will do!
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