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Old 09-25-2009, 10:13 AM
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This is a photo I took of my grandaughter. I like it, but Im not sure about the composition. Should I have cropped to make her a little of center?

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I didn't post the EXIF since I am really just checking composition, although, if you have any other suggestions, I would appreciate comments.
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There is a whole heap of things you could have done technically speaking to improve this shot.Don't do them,they will only ruin it.
She is the center of this shot leave her where she belongs.
Great shot very cute model.
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Composition is good enough....nice shot.
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The only thing I would suggest is a tighter crop - often, these types of shots work quite well as a square crop. She's adorable!
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The only thing I would suggest is a tighter crop - often, these types of shots work quite well as a square crop. She's adorable!
I'd go with Susan for a square crop ^^
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