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Old 07-01-2009, 07:41 AM
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Hi I'm new here!

Anyways, here's a photo from my most recent shoot. I'd like to ask for your C&C's please. Do you think the twig is too distracting? Is the composition, okay? Lighting? Post-processing job? I'd really wanna know what you think. Thanks!



More photos from the shoot could be found here.
It would also be awesome if I could receive C&C's about them too.
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Old 07-01-2009, 08:04 AM
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Love the colors, really nice shot.

The twig is a bit distracting.
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Great shot.
Take the twig out it is a bit distracting.
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Old 07-01-2009, 01:00 PM
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Love how she seems to be bending into the light with the darkness behind her. Dodge and Burn? I'm really new! lol The twig is A little distracting to me, but still a beautiful shot.
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Love how she seems to be bending into the light with the darkness behind her. Dodge and Burn? I'm really new! lol The twig is A little distracting to me, but still a beautiful shot.
Nope! No dodging and burning done on this one. The lighting was just really pretty


Okay, seems like the twig really was a bad element. XD thanks for the replies, I appreciate it
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Old 07-02-2009, 04:53 AM
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beautiful shot and exposure.. where's exif data.?
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I really like this picture; it is so beautiful. Kudos to you
The twig is distracting though ^_^ but it is still overall a very nice picture.
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At my first glance I noticed the pretty model, the beautiful lighting, and the nice color scheme. I like the little detail of her hair highlights matches the color of the railing or whatever she is leaning against. The more that I stare, I also find the twig out of place. But my eyes are drawn back to the model because she is the brightest part of the pic.
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