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06-26-2009, 02:32 PM
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my little sister
I'm new so do not be hard to please critics
  Canon EOS 1000D f/3.5 1/6sec. ISO-200 to criticize the whole picture would be good to know the second time what better to do Last edited by Yeti; 06-26-2009 at 02:41 PM. 
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06-26-2009, 02:35 PM
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Hi Yeti, welcome to dPS.
Please add your EXIF for your photo and specifically what you would like critique on. Thanks.
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06-26-2009, 02:47 PM
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Hi Yeti,
Some eye contact would be great for the next one. She looks adorable. I'd love to see her eyes. As well, try not to cut off any body parts when composing. Her fingers are cut off and it would have been better if you got them in. You got excellent focus. Kids can be hard as they move a lot. Good job.
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06-26-2009, 02:51 PM
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Nice pp on the colors. It had good perspective and DoF. On composition, the head and hand should not have been cropped or you should have captured the complete head and hands.
You may be new to DPS but not in photography.
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