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Old 06-25-2009, 11:23 PM
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This is my first post on this website, please let me know what you think! Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated!




Camera: Nikon D40X
Exposure: 0.003 sec (1/400)
Aperture: f/5.6
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Old 06-26-2009, 02:00 AM
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Is there a certain area of the image you want critique on?

It helps to be more specific.
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Old 06-26-2009, 06:44 PM
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It seems like the focus is on the bond between the female and kid.

If it were purely about the funny face then lets get in tighter.

If it's about the bond then I'd like to see the situation clearer.
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Old 06-26-2009, 07:57 PM
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The image could really do with some cropping, and it could end up brilliant. Play around with whatever post-production tool you like best and see how you can re-composite the shot by cropping.
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Old 06-26-2009, 11:19 PM
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sorry, i guess i was referring to the composition, there was something that was a little off to me.
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Old 06-26-2009, 11:26 PM
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when i took the picture, i was trying to get a candid of the two of them, and the kid saw me and decided to give me this crazy face, I'll see if i can't play around with the original and crop it differently. Thanks for your input, it always helps to get someone else's perspective!
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