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This photograph is the first one I have posted, so I am not entirely sure if I am doing it the right way. I am fairly new to photography and pretty low on equipment (only my Powershot G10 and me) Any critique is greatly appreciated, but specifically angle of the shot and position of the subject.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/39773144@N04/3654323021/ IMG_0127.jpg Camera: Powershot G10 ISO: 100 Exposure: auto Aperture: auto Mode: Color selection mode (red) Post production: iPhoto fade color 2 |
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Hi and welcome to DPS. I'm sorry but this shot is right out of "Children of the Corn." It would make the shot more personable if you had your subject making eye contact with the camera. Placing her right smack in front of that X also makes her look like a target. Hope this helps your next composition.
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Personally, I find the bard door itself distracting. You might move her away from the door a bit and, if you camera will let you select a wide aperture, shorten the depth of field. It's not a difficult technique, if you have either manual or aperture priority settings on your camera.
I agree with the above post about the gaze; I wonder where she's looking. There doesn't seem to be a reason for her to be looking that direction, so it seems odd to me.
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