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Old 05-22-2009, 12:27 AM
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Default B&W Top Body Shot.
Let me know what areas of the photo need work. I'm slowly teaching myself photography and photoshop. I think I need work on lighting. What do you think?



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Old 05-22-2009, 12:42 AM
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I'm no master at lighting myself, but your lighting looks pretty flat to me - I can't see any detail/shadows/depth in the face. Also the harsh shadow against the backdrop is pretty distracting to me.
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Old 05-23-2009, 03:54 PM
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Yes. The shadow outline is not good for me.
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