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Hello! I would like some feedback on how to make this picture pop! I love it, but I feel like it's missing something...
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Old 05-09-2009, 11:34 PM
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I really like this photo, but I think the little girl looks a little dark or dull in comparison to the brightness of the sky, wedding dress, and even the bridesmaids dresses. If she was brighter she may become a stronger focal poin.
overall i think its great as far as composition, story, etc....
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Old 05-10-2009, 12:48 AM
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I think the composition needs a little work. It is like putting too many things / subjects on the photograph.

I find it cute though
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Old 05-10-2009, 03:31 AM
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Maybe if you did a tighter crop on just the girl and the bottom halves of the bride and groom... the rest of it is sort of distracting. And then I would play with the colors and brightness a bit.
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