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Old 05-09-2009, 04:13 AM
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Default Is there something wrong with this image?

Sorry for doing this.... but there is something about this image that im not quite sure about, I dont want to ask specifically because I want to see if anyone else notices it or not first. I know lame but Please let me know your thoughts on the subject and any overall critiques.
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I am not skilled enough to comment on the photo... but to be its a very beautiful photo.... I loved everything about it.

Thanks for sharing.
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Old 05-09-2009, 04:32 AM
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Keep in mind that I'm really tired as I'm writing this, but to me it looks like the hand supporting the babies head is in an impossible position. I don't see any way that that hand could be there without us also seeing the arm in the back of the photo.

Then again, I might just be really tired...

I really like the lighting and tone though.
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That was my first thought too and where is the arm that is attatched to it it just seems to be in a weird position .
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Bingo! I guess that was an easy one : )

The image orignally had just a small portion of the missing arm and the rest was his white shirt. So I guess specifically is this picture worth delivering as is or only if I am able to clone in an arm?

Thanks for the kind words and honest critiques!

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You could always add an arm to the shot.

I did this super quick after the pain meds have kicked in, so its just a fast feeble attempt.


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[QUOTE=WooD;498413]You could always add an arm to the shot.

I did this super quick after the pain meds have kicked in, so its just a fast feeble attempt.


Thats pretty good for a throw together .
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i like the technique and the lightning... i'm not sure its just me too much of gothic movies and songs these days because i feel that this picture is a bit morbid...
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I didn't notice the arm as much as the angle of the baby's head in relation to it's body. It seems unnatural or in the least uncomfortable.
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i like the technique and the lightning... i'm not sure its just me too much of gothic movies and songs these days because i feel that this picture is a bit morbid...

I don't see this at all. This is a common pose among newborn photographers. I am curious the see the original image with the arm not cloned out. If I'm being picky, the only thing that bothers me a little is the diaper. I think newborns photograph much better with no clothes or diapers.
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