my little one

[keys_to_imagination]

i was wondering for a portrait if i converted it with too much white and not enough darkness?



Camera: Nikon D40
Exposure: 0.002 sec (1/500)
Aperture: f/5.3
Focal Length: 35 mm
Focal Length: 35.6 mm
ISO Speed: 400
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: No Flash

[WooD]

I think its a bit overboard myself.

It seems more overexposed than high key to me.

What was the unedited image like?

[keys_to_imagination]

here is the original wood

i was trying to get an artisitc type picture but i think your right to much white

[ebeard2802]

I like the first one better than the second one, but I agree with WooD that it is a little much. Can you back the brightness off a hair?

[keys_to_imagination]

is this a little bit better?

[tjphoto]

Originally Posted by keys_to_imagination

is this a little bit better?

NO.
First one stings your eyes and the second one is too dark around her neck and chin and looks like she has a dirty shirt.
How are you making the conversion to b&w?
this Image would look nice as a pencil sketch,I would try again somewhere in between!
Cute kid,I like the colour one!

[keys_to_imagination]

thx tjp for the suggestions either of these work better?

[LifePhotography08]

Originally Posted by keys_to_imagination

I really like this version much better than any of the others. She is real cute by the way.

[tjphoto]

This photo is in the critique section,I don't want to seem harsh but if this is for learning NO. sorry the pencil sketch has a little too much noise and the second B&W With VIN,is a Whole new image,I thought you where going for arty?You need to concentrate on one image style,I would have liked to of seen the original post fixed.