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My niece was at the park playing and I attempted to capture her lost in her imagination. my intent was to draw the viewer into their own imagination.

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Old 05-06-2009, 03:26 AM
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I think it would strongly improve the shot if we could see her eyes.
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Old 05-06-2009, 08:07 AM
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great, but the car ( that halos her head ) in the background is distracting.
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Old 05-06-2009, 10:50 AM
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Atho u haven't said what u wanted critique on, I think the background is distracting too and needs to be cropped/edited....but apart from that I love this shot, I think u captured her thoughtful or imaginative moment beautifully. I usually don't like selctive colouring too much, but to bring out the colour of her lips a little or something I think would look great, a great pic to play with in pp!
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I love it..I don't think her eyes not showing takes away from the feel of the picture, but the parking lot is distracting.
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