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I like the DOF but not to keen on the crop of the top of his head and chin and him being centred.
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I have to ask, what are those catchlights? They are greenish blue and look like anti-reflective lenses.
I would have cropped more. The balding guy in the background is distracting me. I would have cut some off both the left and right then totally centered his face. I really like the light in this. Also, his chin is just barely cut off. I keep looking for it. I also checked out your flickr. You've got some really good pictures on there. Last edited by kelticsol; 05-02-2009 at 11:19 PM. Reason: spelling |
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having him centered doesnt look well. add to that his chin and top o' his head are missing, and you have poor composition, nice light be damned.
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