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03-12-2009, 04:18 PM
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Engagement photo
 This is a photograph I took as an engagement photo for my cousin. I was wondering what people thought of the Composition and the water? Thanks for your critique cannon XTI Tamaron 28-300 100 ISO f5.6 5sec
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03-12-2009, 04:31 PM
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Please add the EXIF for this photo per the Critique Forum Rules.
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03-12-2009, 04:46 PM
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The water looks beautiful, and it is a lovely shot of the couple. I think the composition could use a bit of tweaking - maybe crop in the right a bit - closer to that smaller rock. I don't mind centered compositions, but with that small rock on the right the centered composition doesn't work for me.
Great overall!
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03-12-2009, 08:54 PM
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its s great concept actually. i like the exanse this uncropped one shows. possibly a vignette around the edge could bring a bit more insentity.. and well as draw the eye toward the centre
a crop putting them to the side would also work. very good though.
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03-12-2009, 11:14 PM
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I think that the photo has a very ethereal feel, which is really romantic (great for an engagement shoot) I also love the water, it adds alot more interest to the picture. Composition is great, this is one of the few centered shot that I think works really well for the overall feel of the picture, I wouldnt change a thing... Great Work!!!
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03-13-2009, 01:55 AM
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How on earth did you get them to be so sharp with a 5 second exposure? They must be really good at staying perfectly still!
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03-13-2009, 02:01 AM
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I really really like this. A tiny (I mean really tiny) amount of vignetting in the upper right would be good I think. And I would try a version with the small rock cloned out, the composition is perfect and very symetric but that rock draws my eye away and unbalances everything. I could be wrong, but I'd try it anyway to find out.
Excellent concept and execution!
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03-13-2009, 12:30 PM
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I think it needs a crop. I think the left it too wide putting them a bit off center.
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03-13-2009, 07:43 PM
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I really like this picture, but theres one small thing that I would suggest... maybe clone out the skin showing below her shirt.
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