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Big windows are better than studio lights!! I really like the photo. Good framing, DOF, focus, simplicity. Good job. Couple of things that could be better (and I am being VERY picky since there isn't much else to help with):
- It would be cool if you could see the whole foot in the background (blurred of course). Sometimes you can get that, sometimes not. It is good the way it is. -Maybe spot heal the skin a little (like between the eyes). But again, not necessary. - Maybe get a little more of the top of the head. Not too much, but enough to complete the bangs a little. You did a great job and it's really good as is.
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Hi,
Well done for your first baby shoot! Great lighting and an adorable expression! I do have a suggestion regarding framing though; With this pose I would have either zoomed out to get the hands in too (baby holing him/herself up is a mile stone) or, cropped in to just get the face, like the edit I attached (if you would prefer I don't repost your work please message me and I'll remove it)... see how it highlights that puzzled expression? ![]() Keep up the great work!
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Thanks for the suggestions.
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The funny part of this photo is that it was one of the very first ones I took. It was really more of a test shot to get my settings down. The baby was still in her pjs and not dressed in any of the cute outfits the mom brought. But I loved the expression and the simplicity of the outfit. Quote:
Thanks for all the compliments and the feedback. Keep the critiques coming :-)
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