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Here is a post from my first time shooting someone's kids who were not mine. It seemed like a train wreck at the time but I think the pictures turned out well.
I would appreciate some feedback. ![]() Camera: Nikon D40 Exposure: 0.002 sec (1/500) Aperture: f/10 Focal Length: 45 mm ISO Speed: 800 Exposure Bias: -2/3 EV Here are a few more http://flickr.com/photos/7569562@N02...7609808752345/ Thank you. Every thing was shot with a D40 with a 18-55 kit lens connected to a SB600 with a PC cable and fired through a shoot through umbrella.
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Ryon Nikon D40 18-55 Kit lens Last edited by Saralonde; 11-24-2008 at 03:01 AM. Reason: added exif |
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Good exposure of the little guy and liked the pose too. But I would not have the background so black. Let the viewer see where the kid is playing. Show some surounding to give context to his pose. Otherwise he seems to be hanging in space.
Placing his head on a third point (top-left) and showing where he us hanging from will add more value to this picture.
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I really like 3rd & 6th on your flickr, very cute shots! And the one you posted is a really nice "fun" shot!
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I like the pose and the background. Looks a little different!
I agree that you should clone out the edge of the supporting hand though.
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"A wise man speaks because he has something to say, a fool speaks because he has to say something." -aristotle. Nikon D70s, 18-55 kit lens, 55-200 VR, 28mm f/2.8, 50mm f/1.8 creativecommons.org - Attribution-Noncommercial-Share Alike My "Best shots" on Flickr |
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I agree about cloning out the edge of the adult hand, but other than that I think it's a great set of pictures. Great job!
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