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Old 11-21-2008, 10:45 PM
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This is a picture I took of my wife and her two sisters at the beach. I think it turned out alright but always looking for additional advice. I know their poses could be improved. That is definitely an area where I need help.



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Exposure: 0.05 sec (1/20)
Aperture: f/4.5
Focal Length: 34 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: Flash fired
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Old 11-22-2008, 12:28 AM
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I like the way their eyes pop. I keep looking at this shot and there is something not quite balanced to it. I can't really put my finger on it, though. The sky isn't as interesting as it probably was during the shoot, so maybe crop a bit off the top? Not sure what else I can tell you. I am sure there is someone here that can figure it out though.
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