Shawnah

[angeleyes216]

I took this photo of my friends daughter and wanted some suggestions on how to improve it . I did some PP with lightroom and im not sure if its too much.



Camera: HP PhotoSmart C945
Exposure: 0.013 sec (1/78)
Aperture: f/2.8
Focal Length: 7.6 mm
ISO Speed: 200
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: Flash did not fire

[dhart]

Love the eyes and expression. The background looks fake to me. My eyes keep going to the hotspots over her head. I do like the framing of the trees but it would also be good to see her right arm a bit more. I don't know what the original was like, so can't make a judgement on the PP other than to say that I can see it on the edges especially.

[sk66]

She's a beautiful girl and the picture is nice. I think the biggest issue is the hotspots.
To make this picture work, I suggest adding a fairly tight vignette.

[WooD]

Great capture, but the background does take away from it.