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Old 11-12-2008, 04:24 AM
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Hello
My first post in your forum,and i would like your point of view abou my photogaphy.I took the following shot durring the auto salon of Athens before few days.I will post only the link becouse the photo is big (1024px).

http://www.imaginas.gr/gallery/pictu...4-1_medium.jpg

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Old 11-12-2008, 02:58 PM
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Your image wont load for me. I only get the top inch or so.
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Old 11-12-2008, 03:13 PM
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Hey Stathis,
Looks pretty good. A small note is that using front lightining makes the face loose depth. Your key light is barely above camera so her nose looks very flat. Perhaps a bit to one side or the other.
The other thing I'm not fond of is when their head is just touching the frame. Either a tighter crop or bring those last few hairs in IMO would help enhance the photo.
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Old 11-12-2008, 03:54 PM
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Smile model photo

i see generally the model photographs are taken with flat light......i saw a shoot on youtube. the photographer was using ring flash and took all flat shots....no modelling lights. yours may be a different story.....the model is good, the pose is good....and the features appeared as come out in flat lighting. the small weakness is her front tooth distracting the attention, better a lettle less smile to hide that. thanks.
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