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Old 01-22-2012, 09:20 PM
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Please let me know what do you guys think. This is the first time I am posting my work anywhere and it will the first time I will get a real critique:P...so plz be gentle...
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Old 01-22-2012, 09:29 PM
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Welcome to DPS. You will find there are many here willing to provide good feedback. You will get a much better response if you follow the Critique Forum Rules. Secondly, many do not click a link; therefore, it is best to post the image to the thread. Many have Flickr accounts to do just that.

As for your image. I like the compostion and general feel of the image. I think the B&W works very well. The focus on the main subject is soft or missed. Keep at it and take advantage of all the tutorials here.
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Old 01-22-2012, 09:37 PM
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hi...thnx...I have problems focusing as you pointed out...my lens doesnt hav a vr/is ..and also I have a very small viewfinder...so sometimes when I think I have focused and click...after I watch it zoomed in ...its not sharp enough...what is a good solution for it?
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There is a general rule to follow. A ratio of focal length to shutter speed. This ration should be at least 1:1. If your focal length is 80mm then the shutter speed should at a MINIMUM be 1/80. Also good hand holding technique is required.
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