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Old 01-22-2012, 05:22 AM
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So I finally got my nifty fifty. Posted in the wrong forum as was thinking to myself of why isn't anyone saying anything. Taking comments and criticisms.

New lens love

Exposure 0.006 sec (1/160)
Aperture f/1.8
Focal Length 50 mm
ISO Speed 400
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Old 01-22-2012, 05:32 AM
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make sure to read the rules - Critique Forum Rules ; I would recommend adding your EXIF info with your post here...

but anyways, the crop seems sloppy, the hand comes into play but your arm is with the hand thats coming into frame is cropped off... I'm not a fan of when a arm/leg is cut off then hands/feet comes back into frame oddly. I would recommend pulling back if possible and shoot a wider focal length to get more of your upper body.
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Old 01-22-2012, 05:49 AM
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thanks for the info, yeah forgot about the EXIF.
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