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Old 01-04-2012, 05:43 PM
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Hello DPS, a few weeks ago I posted a photo of a traditional "Tanoora" dancer and got some of the wealthiest reviews I can ever get, again this time another shot of the same setting, this time with the face involved and more movement in the skirt, you guys advised me not to overthink things so that's what I'm gonna do, leave everything to you, you guys direct me and feed me back on whatever issues you might see, tight composition for instance, is cropping the guys hands bothering you or such, and is the dark background with "some" retained texture working in favor? I'm desperate for help, here you go...

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Oh and one last issue, I almost always have trouble with color, since I process my photos on a high end LG LCD TV, so back on standard laptop screens I don't know how the colors look like, any issues with color here? cause I almost always get frustrated when seeing the photos on my laptop instead of my TV, thanks guys, keep shooting
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Old 01-05-2012, 05:12 AM
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I like the colors, I like the sense of movement. I like the lighting.

I would prefer to see more of the face, or none at all. A face that seems to be all eyes and nostrils seems to me to detract from what is otherwise a very pleasing picture.
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Old 01-09-2012, 09:28 PM
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I like this image very much - the colors are great. I love the movement in the bottom half -- my only quibble is I would like the area around the face to be sharp and the eyes sharp, but that would be difficult under the circumstances and you don't give your EXIF info.
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