#1 (permalink)  
Old 12-04-2011, 03:53 AM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Posts: 38
Default Composition question

I recently took this photo of my son and am looking for composition critique. I was lucky that he even sat down for a brief moment to allow me to capture the shot, but am wondering if his elbow being cut off is distracting. Also, what about the tree in the back? Either way, it's a keeper in the Mom sense and will be framed on my wall, but I am looking to improve on the photography side as well.

Thanks in advance for your thoughts.

EXIF:
Nikon D60
1/160
f3.5
60mm
ISO 400
No flash

All dressed up
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 12-04-2011, 04:09 AM
Hill Country Hack's Avatar
dPS +1000 Club
 
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Northwest of San Antonio Texas
Posts: 1,968
Default

Cute kid. This is a very nice "Mpm" picture. You pointed out the two most galing issues with this capture. You could go tighter with the crop and make it just a head and shoulders shot. As for the tree growing out of his head. You can clone it out if you have the proper software.
__________________
Canon Rebel XS 18-55mm IS, 75-300mm, 50mm f1.8, 70-200mm f2.8
Flickr
Always ok for DPS users to critique and edit my photos for instructional purposes.
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 12-04-2011, 04:32 AM
graciousness's Avatar
Mrs Cranky Lately
 
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: Sydney, Australia
Posts: 1,432
Default

Given that you mentioned it's a very rare occasion for your son to sit down for a second for a shot, I would just take this shot and runaway with it. He's exposed well enough (on my monitor, anyway) and he's got a cute smile on his face. Embrace it for its sentimental value and enjoy

So long as you realise what the potential issues are with your photos, then you know what to watch out for next time you get another opportunity.

Cheers,

Grace
__________________
Canon 40D, Canon 30D, 24-105mm L, 100-400mm L, 50mm f/2.5 macro, 70-300mm , 550 EX, 430 EX and a bunch of other stuff too fiddly to mention. And a new imac!! Yey!!

My 500px
My FLICKR
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 12-04-2011, 06:19 PM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Posts: 38
Default

Thanks for the comments. I had a feeling both the elbow and tree were a problem. Unfortunately I have not built up the courage to try Photoshop yet, so the cloning of the tree will have to wait.
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 12-04-2011, 08:08 PM
TNH's Avatar
TNH TNH is offline
Happy-go-lucky Photog. :)
 
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: On planet Earth. I may go to the moon someday. If I do, I'll show you pics.
Posts: 1,634
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by gimmie5 View Post
Thanks for the comments. I had a feeling both the elbow and tree were a problem. Unfortunately I have not built up the courage to try Photoshop yet, so the cloning of the tree will have to wait.
Aww, this is such a cute picture! He is soooo adorable! You really can't tell that he doesn't like to sit down for long, because he looks so relaxed.

The elbow doesn't really bother me too much, but it would still look better if it were in. So I would say, if you took it like that, then it's fine, leave it! But if you cropped his elbow out in PP, I'd re-crop it so that it wasn't cut off.

About the tree- I agree, it would look great if it were cloned out. It is kinda distracting.
You don't really need Photoshop or some expensive program to clone. You can download Gimp to do that. It is a completely free (and safe to download) photo editing program, you just download it straight to your computer. I have it, and love it. You can clone things out, make pictures with different layers, and all that cool stuff. For free! It's really great. You could easily clone out the tree with Gimp, easy as pie!

And if you decide you don't like Gimp, then you won't feel bad for buying it, because you didn't have to buy it.
__________________
I love photography and want to learn all that I can! So always feel free to give me helpful critique and suggestions, it's always appreciated!
Check out my My Flickr Photostream!

It's always Ok to edit and re-post my pics, but in the DPS critique forum only. =) Thanks!
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

What’s Your Preference?

Daily Digest

Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.

This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.

Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:

Weekly Summary

For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!

To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.

Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter:

 
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0