Critique Needed!

[qadkins]

Thanks!

[windrider86]

Please check out the critique forum rules that are posted at he top of the page for each section. There is more information that you should be including in your posts. More info=more help from everyone else! More help from everyone else=the more you learn!
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[Carlos Santos]

Ok I took the time to search for you camera specs and my first critique is about the fact that you shot this image on automatic mode. Try to use manual or aperture priority modes as they will give you more control over the camera specs. In other words, don’t let the camera thing for you. The concept and idea behind the shot are good though. The silhouette is fine but for me the lens flare detracts from the shop. Well that’s it for now. Thanks for sharing your work.

By the way the specs for this shot are:
Camera Canon EOS REBEL T3
Exposure 0.001 sec (1/1250)
Aperture f/4.0
Focal Length 35 mm
ISO Speed 100
Exposure Bias 0 EV
Flash Off, Did not fire

Subject Distance 0.8 m


Custom Rendered Normal
Exposure Mode Auto
White Balance Auto
Scene Capture Type Standard
Compression JPEG (old-style)

[Fishpic]

I like the shot, but the flair creating that red and green dot really distracts from the overall picture in my opinion.