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Since you didn't include EXIF data as per the critique rules I will only speak about composition.
Good catch lights in his eyes. I would like to see this as a portrait crop as you chopped off his front hand and the back hand does not add to the photo. As a matter of personal taste, I would prefer a darker background without the blowout in the upper camera right corner. His blonde hair gets lost in the bright window.
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My apologies on completely forgetting to include the EXIF data. Here it is:
Model Canon EOS REBEL T1i ISO 100 Exposure 1/50 sec Aperture 5.0 Focal Length 41mm Flash Used false Orientation 1 White Balance 1 Exposure Bias 0.0 Also, the picture that I submitted was post edit. Maybe I should have just left well enough alone and not edited it, here's a link to the original. https://picasaweb.google.com/lh/phot...eat=directlink Multipara, is the original still too red in the face, or is that better? Hill Country Hack, I wasn't sure if I should remove the hands from the picture or not...thanks for clearing that up for me, I will work on a better crop and see if that enhances the picture. |
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