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I am a newcomer to Digital photography. I just equipped myself with serious equipement and I am very passionnate about this new hobbie.
I just did my first photo shoot with a model, outdoor. I worked with the kelvin settings to experiment between warn and cold lighting in my portraits. I tend to like the colder portaits in this session. I would appreciate your comments to improve my composition and technique . All pictures are shot with Canon 5d Mark II with either a Sigma 85mm F1.4 or Canon 70-200 2,8 L II. This particular one is shot with the 70-200, ISO 100, 175mm, f4, 1/250 The rest of the session can be seen here Vanessa - Outdoor portraits - JADupont's Photos | SmugMug Many thanks.
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Thanks. This forum-website is awesome! Looking forward to get point of views on my shots.
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Hi and welcome.
![]() Really great set for your first model shoot. Have you tried adjusting the wb in pp? I agree the cool setting is much better. As for your post I think the pose is nice. I would have liked to see a little more of her far cheek to give more dimension. Watch for bright spots as they distract your eye from the subject. hth
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Yes, more cheek like that one. This one also has a bright area of sun in her hair. Just moving her into full shade will sort this out for you next time. I suspect that even if you shoot in RAW, that her hair will not be recoverable on this occasion
![]() Just a musing but, I think wb is very subjective. For my kind of family portraits it needs to be accurate. I think in fashion photography you can use it to create a mood or look? It does however take time to learn to see colour - but a necessary thing
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I think the cold/warm images are all "too far"....Try adjusting them in post. It also seems like the "cold" are underexposed a bit and most of the "warm" a touch hot.
I just did a levels/exposure adjustment on this
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Thanks, I agree, your version is better. Just a curve adjustment, right?
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new version with curves adjusted
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