Fall Shot

[JenLilley]

Please let me know what you think.

[SGToliver]

Hi Jen,

I think a couple of things might improve this image for you. First, the shirt pattern is distracting me from the rest of the photo. Second, I would try to crop the image to remove the sky as the cake style layer is distracting as well. Last, I would have maybe moved him either facing the sun to get that nice warm glow on the rest of him or with it to his back and used a flash for fill. Looks like a nice spot for shots! hopefully it is close to home and use it again as you perfect you technique.

[SGToliver]

let me know if you want me to remove this as some are not comfortable with others touching their work. I am at work so I used................PAINT......to crop this but this is what I would do with it.

[windrider86]

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