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any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.. thanks
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Exposure: 1/10 sec at f1.8
ISO: 200
Did not fire flash
Lens: 35mm f/1.8
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Old 10-03-2011, 03:43 AM
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This might help you a little bit.

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oopss.. my bad.. anyway thank you for reminding me the details.
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you've got some motion blur since you're shooting at 1/10?!!!!
why didn't you bump up your ISO to 800 or even 1600 to a faster shutter speed?
other than that I like the framing but your WB is way off.
try fixing it in PP.
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Hi MrJones..

yes I'm shooting at 1/10 sec at this pic. yes, I agree it blurs. thanks again.
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Ryan, you realise you can only post one photo for critique a day, right? Something to remember for the future
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