Railroad Shoot!

[splphotography]

Photoshoot that I did during sunset. How is my composition? Exposure? Still learning and progressing as I go. Let me know what you think :-)

Canon 60D using Tamron 28-75/2.8. No flash

EXIF
ISO: 400
40mm
F/4
Shutter: 1/125

[Rentham]

Exposure looks good. Railroad tracks are about as cliche as you can get, and it's not a particularly effective use of them. Instead of taking advantage of the leading lines, you have them oblique to your model and bisecting her body at various points. You've also cropped her foot at an awkward place. Could have been a nice shot in a different location, imo.

[tlcphotog]

For a photo taken at sunset, the tones are not very "golden." Agreeing with the above poster, the foot is cropped awkwardly. Probably not the best location. Excellent pose, although!