morning rush

[josh797]

this was taken while i was working with the shutter speed.

[ccting]

You have captured the motions so beautifully
a)The man on the left is shaking his head left-right
b) The old lady is waiting patiently
c) etc etc...

The nearest man on the right, I believe many have their own perception what is that... In Art, that meets the expressionism theory - which gives some clarity but not absolute clarity that will keep many of you stare at this portion. Well, at this point, this picture, for me is success because you many keep thinking, what is the thing (the man on the right - blur because of nearer distance --> that's why you need faster speed to freeze motion if you are near to subject). In this context, wow,, great.. nice.

If you are able to arrange those ppl in 1,2,3,5,8 in ratio, then that will be much better, but... possible?

distinct feeling of depth between the man on the right (if only if you able to perceive it as human), vector wise looks like unbalance.. one to left, 3 to front.

Issit nicer if you can move the man on the right to the left, the man on the left to the right, making the eyes easier to see from the left to right? For this i am not sure..

Square 1:1 frame well fit to unorganized pattern (see the red boxes,,) or they are organized from right to left... Any reason why the frame is 1:1 and not 3:2? This pic is bias to the old women at the middle (i guess), and the square frame makes me think of the subjects are equally focus..

[windrider86]

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