Innocence

[Jessica Otto]

Ok, first time I am posting in the citique section... let me hear it... :-)



EXIF:

Camera: Canon Rebel
f/8
1/125
ISO 400
Focal length: 210mm

[3bayjunkie]

I think the B&W conversion came out good

[Tito87]

Forgive me for being such a stickler, but there are rules for the critique forums. I'm sure you will get a lot more comments if you follow them. Cute little girl,btw.

[vorlon1]

Jessica, here is my honest critique. I found the intensity and placement of the right arm of the person behind the baby very distracting. When I first looked at the picture I thought for a moment that the child may have had her right arm in a cast, until I made sense out of all the shapes. My eye was really drawn to that person's arm, so I think, compositionally if you could either crop it out or have changed perspective so the eye would naturally go to the child, it would be very good. I hope this is useful feedback, because the other visual aspects of the image are very appealing. Thanks for the opportunity to comment.