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Old 09-05-2011, 12:23 PM
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This is my first photo I share... Trying to get the hand of photography... What do you think?

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Old 09-05-2011, 12:33 PM
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I think it's a really sweet shot. It's very vintage 1950's to me.

I'd also add the exif data as per the rules of the forum. No need to get a mod hot under the collar
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Old 09-05-2011, 01:25 PM
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It would have also been much better if the heads of the two bigger boys were not cut off. Otherwise, it is a pretty good one.
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Old 09-05-2011, 01:38 PM
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You should take a moment to read through the critique rules. You are missing some very key things here in order for us to help you. Be more specific than "what do you think?"

Heads and feet are both cut off in this image plus the main subjects are a bit out of focus.

Keep trying and give us more so we can provide more.
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