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Old 09-03-2011, 10:29 PM
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Hello, It has been a LONG time since I have posted in here. I Have been super busy.

Here is a shot from last night.

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70mm
No flash
Really dont any question about it. I feel that its a great photograph it and would like to see what you see whats wrong with it.
Feel free to tear it apart.

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Old 09-03-2011, 10:49 PM
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beautiful I like the emotion in this one.
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Old 09-03-2011, 11:14 PM
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Cute picture but the skin tone/exposure/color of the baby's skin doesn't seem to match the mom's?

Not sure if I'm explaining it right. I might try to increase the exposure on the mom's skin about 1/3 stop or something to see if I could get it to match the baby's.
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Old 09-04-2011, 11:47 PM
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Cute picture but the skin tone/exposure/color of the baby's skin doesn't seem to match the mom's?

Not sure if I'm explaining it right. I might try to increase the exposure on the mom's skin about 1/3 stop or something to see if I could get it to match the baby's.
Thank you. I will try that.
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Old 09-05-2011, 12:31 AM
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Cute picture but the skin tone/exposure/color of the baby's skin doesn't seem to match the mom's?

Not sure if I'm explaining it right. I might try to increase the exposure on the mom's skin about 1/3 stop or something to see if I could get it to match the baby's.
Couldn't it be that they simply have different skin tones. Just my opinion, though.
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Old 09-05-2011, 03:34 AM
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Couldn't it be that they simply have different skin tones. Just my opinion, though.
Yes, they have different skin tones but it almost seems like the mother's was saturated more than the baby's. Maybe it seems like there was more light on the baby and it doesn't seem to match the rest of the picture?
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Old 09-05-2011, 04:46 PM
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The mom did have alot of makeup on also. But I am gonna try to touch it up some. Thanks guys.
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