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These are some of my first attempts at people photography. Too much shadow? Let me know what you think! :]
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Old 08-14-2011, 04:20 AM
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These are some of my first attempts at people photography. Too much shadow? Let me know what you think! :]
they look like it was shot on a cell phone honestly, from level of quality and crop. But as for composition I loved a lot! I also loved her facial expression and pose, she seems like a pro. Except the photo that clipped too much from the forehead.

Personally, the post processing isn't my taste, either go black and white or pure color, color tones are just not my thing at least for these photos.
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